I wrote a reserch and i have some notes I need you to add these notes to the paper that I'm going to to attatch for you and the notes are: 

- your title is working pretty well . . . can you add some creativity to it?

- your examples and sources are used effectively

- your in-text citations are nice (there are just a few issues with the MLA, but it really strong overall)

- try adding a few more transitions between ideas, sentences, and/or paragraphs

- keep working and you should do well on this paper